Bluebird Success Stories

“When my daughter was a junior she was struggling with writing her college essay. I contacted Trisha asking if she could help. Trisha helped my daughter gather her ideas and put the essay in the right format that colleges are looking for. My daughter was applying to a lot of Nursing programs and needed a strong essay to get in. Her grades were great, but with no SAT due to Covid, and a very competitive major, she needed a great essay to help her stand out in a large applicant pool.

She got in to every university but one. Her top school was direct admissions into the nursing program and the admissions director told her that her essay really let them know who she was and that she would be a good fit for the school.  She is currently in her Junior year at Sacred Heart University and loving it! Thank you, Trisha, for all the help!

Highly recommended!”

— Rachel Kaiser

“Dr. Egbert’s college entrance essay workshop took all the stress out of the process for me. I am not a good writer but Dr. Egbert made the process enjoyable. I ended up loving my essay! So did every college I applied to because I got into every school! I am currently a freshman at Villanova University.”

— Maya S.

“My son was applying to all Ivy League and elite level universities. Although he had good grades he was worried about his application essay. Dr. Egbert was recommended to me from a friend and she worked with my son through the whole process from coming up with a great concept for the essay to the drafting and revising of his essay until he had a polished final draft ready for submission. This workshop was the best investment we made in helping him get into his dream school.”

My daughter and I had the pleasure  of working with Trisha during the college application process. The essay part of the applications can be a bit overwhelming. What is the university looking for? Is there a hidden meaning behind each question?

Am I answering the question to the best of my ability? 

Trisha will guide your child.

My daughter wrote her own essay in her own words using her own thoughts.  

During the editing stage,  Trisha  offered advise in a comforting and timely manner.  Trisha was there along the way to give my child the confidence to use her own voice!

-Ivy Guralnick

I worked with Jon after seeing my dream job opening. I had not worked on my resume in a decade or more. I really had no idea how to craft my resume to stand out among all the other applications.

Jon made the process so easy and helped me create the perfect resume.

After I was selected for an interview, I again reached out to Jon for interviewing coaching.

Guess what? I got the job! I do not think this would have happened if I had not worked with Jon.

-Joseph Willis